The one thing I would say you could improve on in your blog is the content. It felt like at some points in your blog I was just reading the same information over again.
I really liked your I would change is the amount, sometimes I felt like I didn't get enough to fully understand your blog. Also you repeated a lot of things over and over.
I think you did a really good job on your blog but it could use a little more fun facts! You could use comparrisons or just cool information that readers would like to know!
You did a great job about making sure that you had the right information down. But looking back over the whole blog itself looks like it could have more detail and maybe more voice!?
The one thing I would say you could improve on in your blog is the content. It felt like at some points in your blog I was just reading the same information over again.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your I would change is the amount, sometimes I felt like I didn't get enough to fully understand your blog. Also you repeated a lot of things over and over.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job on your blog but it could use a little more fun facts! You could use comparrisons or just cool information that readers would like to know!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job about making sure that you had the right information down. But looking back over the whole blog itself looks like it could have more detail and maybe more voice!?
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